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The Strange World - Cover 1

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Cover Volume 1
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Cover Vol 1 ---> [link]


Pg 1 (English) -->[link]
Pg 2 (English) -->[link]
Pg 3 (English) -->[link]
Pg 4 (English) -->[link]
Pg 5 (English) -->[link]
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Pg 1 (Italiano) -->[link]
Pg 2 (Italiano) -->[link]
Pg 3 (Italiano) -->[link]
Pg 4 (Italiano) -->[link]
Pg 5 (Italiano) -->[link]
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Ito-Saith-Webb's avatar
Here is the critique you requested.


The basic lay out of this is not to bad but I think you could have eliminated the frame around the city. The character feels like it could use some more developing and refinement. I do like the simple color scheme but I think you could have increased the use of values and created more plains.


Hope that helps.